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环境问题如何解决

Development of technology causes environmental problems. Some people think people should choose a simple way of life. Others think that we should use technology to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.



Technological advance and economic prosperity are frequently attended by the fact that the ecosystem of the earth is getting from bad to worse. Under this circumstance, an absolute consensus can hardly be reached that(去掉) whether people should choose a simple way of life or use technology to address these problems. For my part, I side with the latter to a larger extent(这种类型的文章第一段不需要提观点,可以这样写:I will make an objective analysis of this argument in my following essay).


Some people harbor the belief that individuals should make due contribution to ecological preservation since a wonderful living space is intimately bound up with people’s daily life. For example, people should reduce excessive reliance on private cars and turn to public transport with the aim to lower exhaust emission. In addition, using cloth or paper bags instead of plastic ones does a great job in preventing soil pollution for the reason that the latter are difficult to decompose in the soil.(开头第一句要强调简单的生活方式,不是个人)


However, others maintain that technology is the most effective measure to the challenge on the grounds that people are unlikely to give up their conveniences easily. Taking transport for an example, some electric cars have been invented, which is a good way to save oil and avoid the worsening of air quality. Thus, more attention need to be paid to explore alternative and eco-friendly energy because this can be a permanent approach. Not to mention that recycling seems to be the only channel to tackle excessive rubbish produced over generations. With improved technology, recycling will make more economical and environmentally friendly in the days to come.(第二段和三段的比例应该相差不大,最好平衡点,这个和你自己的观点没关系)


From my own perspective, I do believe that technology is beneficial for human beings if we use it wisely and properly. In fact, the development of technology and individual efforts do not fall into conflict, both of which should go hand in hand with each other.(结尾段是回答题目中的第二个问题,所以要多写一点,可以双边,可以倾向)

写的还是不错的,考试的时候如果可以保持这个水准,7分应该没问题。一定要口题目啊,题目是简单的生活方式的。还有最重要的是要注意这种文章的结构 7分

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